When Ashley Miller sees a Craigslist ad for an all-expense
paid vacation to Scotland with a handsome Highland “escort”, she’s all over it.
Worn out from working two jobs to pay off the debts her scam artist ex-husband
left her with, she just needs a friggin’ break already. Rolling, misty
mountains of the Scottish Highlands, here she comes!
But one minute she’s sipping a latte and the next she’s
zapped to the 2nd century and promptly informed she’s managed to wed her
handsome Highlander without even an “I do.” Oh, hell no.
After a devastating tragedy, Connall’s tribe is left with
few marriageable women. When his Druid priest suggests a place filled with
bonnie lasses, he of course agrees to go fetch one for himself. But nothing
prepared Connall for his sassy new wife, nor his tribe for a woman determined
to see equal rights for all women.
Now the men are threatening revolt if he can’t rein his
young wife in, but it might be too late. The women are demanding the men get
“woke”—which of course makes no sense because they already woke that morn—and
give women “the vote,” whatever the bloody hell that is. Despite all that,
Connall can’t stop wanting to convince his wife to get naked, and he’s starting
to wonder if he’s been bewitched.
Only the more he gets to know her, the more he starts to
think she’s just what they needed. If only he survives her next demand...
Publisher: Entangled | Genre: Time Travel Romance | Source: Author | Rating: 2.5
The author kindly sent me this book when it released back in
2019 and, sadly, I just could not get into it. I ended up putting the title in
my TBR jar and it ended up being the book I pulled for February.
Here’s what’s going on. After a raid left his tribe devoid
of marriageable women, Connall, the chief’s son, seeks help from the tribe’s
spell caster to travel to the future in hopes of finding a wife. Once in
present day, Connall places an ad on Craig’s List, which Ashley, eager to
escape the chaos her ex-husband has caused her, answers believing that she is
accepting the job as maid in some type of Scottish estate. Realizing she’s in
the past, Ashley has a thing or two she’s determined to change and Connall’s
determined to convince Ashley to be his wife in more than just name. Not only
does Ashley have to navigate her way through a strange time and place, she has
to figure out what her feelings for Connall are and if she’s willing to give up
her old life.
This one was a bit slow to start but I did enjoy the
direction it was heading. I found the concept of Connall traveling from 156
Scotland to present day San Francisco in search of a wife intriguing but the
book didn’t live up to its full potential.
I struggled with the characters a bit. Connall was
interesting to a point—it’s all about his duty to his tribe—but I don’t feel as
though I was able to figure out who Connell was. I needed more about his
character. Ashley wasn’t one of my favorites. She’s okay at the start then gets
a little annoying as the book on. What bothered me with Ashley was the fact she
wanted to bring her ‘wokeness’ to the tribe (more about that later).
The romance was just lacking in connection. There’s no
chemistry between Connall and Ashley. I was waiting for some connection to
develop and it never happened. There were a few spicy scenes but those even
lacked chemistry. The majority of the plot focused on the workings of the tribe
and while I have no problem with that, and do like seeing it when it’s done
correctly, I don’t want it to crowd out the romance in a book that’s labeled
‘romance’.
There is a magic system in this book. Mungan, the spell
caster, performs several spells in the book and, while I did find this approach
interesting, I don’t feel as though it was explained enough. It would have been
interesting to learn more about this magic system as it gave both Connall and
Ashley interesting abilities. Since Ashley had her phone and laptop with her
when she traveled to the past, she ended up with the ability of a search
engine, which made the tribe view her as a seer. There was also a difference in
which the way time passed. In the past, it’s faster than in the future, it
would have been nice to have an explanation.
I did like the nod to history in this one. It’s does show
the turbulent relationship between the Roman’s and the Celtic tribes during
this time but, again, there’s no balance. It goes from romance straight into
historical fiction.
I’m struggling with the rating for his one. I originally
gave this a 3 because it was okay and I don’t think most readers will have the
issues that I have but I ended up changing my rating to a 2.5 (and I do feel
that .5 is being generous).
What I didn’t like about the book was the lack of research
and this will probably be a me thing, something that the historian in me found
irksome. Here’s a few of the things that irked me.
Ashley wants the tribe to get ‘woke’, she wants the women to
have more of a say in the way the tribe functions. The book is set in 156 A.D.,
this was a little over 100 years after the death of Boudicca, and Connall’s
tribe is the Horse People or the Epidii. They were a Pictish tribe from the
Kintyre region of Scotland. Women had power within Pictish tribes. They held
leadership positions, they were warriors, they were diplomats, they held
positions in council, and so much more. They were not sitting around waiting
for the men in the tribe to tell them what to do.
Connall wears a great kilt. The great kilt wasn’t invented
until the end of the 16th century. The lèine, which was a woolen
tunic and the precursor to the great kilt, wasn’t invented until the end of the
3rd century or the beginning of the 4th. Connall would have worn a braccae,
which is a pair of loose fitting woolen trousers that was belted at the waist.
It’s possible that they also wore a shorter type of tunic.
The last thing that irks me is the lack of Scottish Gaelic
used. In her author notes, she states that, “it wouldn’t have been smart or
possible” to use Scottish Gaelic when writing from Connall’s perspective. While
I don’t think everything Connall said should have been in Gaelic, I do think
the author should have included more than just a handful of popular sayings or
stopped using the phrase, ‘he said in Gaelic’. I find it both insulting as a reader and lazy
for the author.
Overall, I feel like this was an attempt to jump on the
Outlander bandwagon and it fell flat. It needed a bit more chemistry, world
building, and balance. While I would struggle to recommend this book, I do
recommend the author’s Must Love
series.